Monday, 20 January 2014

Pitch and Feedback


   


Are there any areas of the presentation you would like to give more detail on?

- Yes, I would. I would like to give more detail on the conventions slide because I know I didn't describe it out accurately and I was talking about something else.

What did your audience identify as the strengths of your music video idea?

- They liked how I related my idea to intertextuality and a specific modern day theme. e.g a modern day Bonnie and Clyde.

What did your audience identify as areas of improvements?

-  My audience made me aware that I was starring at the board to much and wasn't making eye contact which was due to nerves, so that would definitely be an improvement.

What changes will you make to your music video concept based on the feedback you received?

- I will change how the relationship is portrayed in the music video so it can still relate to people and look like something from a film.

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